Thorough Punishment

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Sorry about the delay, but here you go. I haven't done anything in the third person for a while, so I decided to go back to it. I really prefer the first person, but I like to mix things up to add a little diversity to my work. I also haven't described a transformation in a while, so I threw in one of those as well. Honestly, I always feel like these types of captions are some of my weaker pieces. I guess that's because I write dialog so easily I tend to neglect more distant perspectives, so I don't practice them as much as I should. I've read so many captions and stories that describe transformations so much better than I ever could, so I tend to avoid them as no one likes admitting their shortcomings. But it's something I really need to do more often as that's the only way I'm ever going to get better at it. See you Wednesday.

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One Hell of a Ride

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Sorry about the quiet week, the real world decided to get in the way again. Anyway, this was a request by Amber Smithe. She sent me the story outline and the images, which makes it really sad that it still took me almost two weeks to finish it as she did most of the work. But hopefully she likes the final product and thinks it was worth the wait. I like how this one turned out, a little more plot centric than I usually like my captions to be, but it's always good to throw in some variety to my normal style of captioning.

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Getting Rid of the Attitude

ADS It's been a while since I've had a described transformation caption, so I decided to go ahead and make one. So I wrote a simple story that would be somewhat interesting on its own and have a transformation take place in the time frame of the story. It ended up running a little long, so I had to make the text smaller than I usually like, but in the end I like how it turned out. Enjoy the rest of the weekend.

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Melt

ADS My first caption with the title in the image. I'm fairly happy with how the caption ended up looking, the story is nothing special though. It's funny, I actually meant for this to be one of my standard forced lesbian taunting captions but I just couldn't make it happen. The past couple captions have been relatively clean (at least for my standards anyway) as I haven't been in a good smut writing mood in a while. I'll try to dirty things up a bit in the next update as I know that's what most of you come here looking for in the first place.

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Burn to Disc?

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Here's the first of two requests by Candy. She gave me some great ideas for future caps including this one, a request involving myself, her, and her creation, the Hentai Verse. I've never done a Hentai caption before so it was a interesting challenge to take on. I think it turned out pretty well, and hopefully she thinks so as well.

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A Rose for Alice

ADS Thank you all for your patience, now let's see if I can reward you with some new captions.

Well that was a much longer break than I had originally intended, but that's the way life goes. Things are still a little crazy, but I'm hoping to be able to turn out at least one new caption a week for now, although I'll certainly try to do more.

This first one is a request from Alice from three weeks ago, and I'm extremely sorry about the delay. Alice sent me the story outline and the images she wanted, so normally this would have been done a day or two after I received it...well that obviously didn't happen. I fell like I could have done a little more with this, but the captioning gears are sticking a little, and I didn't want to make her wait any longer for this than she already has. Hopefully she's happy with the outcome.

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Isn't Magic Fun?

ADS Two days, two captions, now that's more like it. This was a lot of fun to write as I love rhyming couplets. I'm pretty sure that comes from the heavy diet of Dr. Seuss I grew up with. Anyway, I figured it was time to have a little fun with my writing which inspired this cute little transformation poem. The last line still bugs me as I couldn't get the right number of syllables so the beat doesn't match, but whatever.

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Dumb Whore

ADS The long awaited return of POV captions.

I recently received a request for some more POV captions, and seeing how I hadn't done one in a while I figured now was as good a time as any to bring back an old standby. Now this is by no means one of my best captions, but it was a fun quickie to make, and hopefully some light, simple smut is a nice change of pace from my heavier, more concept oriented Seven captions.

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