Taken Away

ADS A new caption, and a new layout for posts. This should be fun.

 So first up a quick word on the caption. This was supposed to be a quickie, but the story just kept growing. Since it usually goes the other way, I try not to cut myself short when the ideas keep coming. If I don't have a second image, I'll do some revising if the text gets too small, but for this one everything seemed to wrap up nicely and I didn't need to cut too much.
 

Now onto the new post layout. The results of the poll were 24 to 16 in favor of keeping the older post style. And while I respect the verdict, the sample size is just too small for me to put much stock in the result. So I'm going to try out the click-through format for a little while, just to see if I like it. If I do, it'll stay, or if I don't/enough people request to go back to the old style I will. But for now, I want to see how this goes.

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Before

ADS First post of 2012. I originally had wanted it to be something dramatic and epic, something that would really set the tone for the rest of the year. Thought provoking and deep, the sort of piece that really makes a reader stop and look at their own lives. But then I decided to scrap that idea and go with smut instead. After all, sex sells.

But in all seriousness, I'm hoping for another great year of captions. I've already got a few longer pieces lined up and ready to go, so if everything continues to go well you should be seeing them shortly. Happy 2012 everyone, make it a great year, as we're all dead come December 21st!

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Thorough Punishment

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Sorry about the delay, but here you go. I haven't done anything in the third person for a while, so I decided to go back to it. I really prefer the first person, but I like to mix things up to add a little diversity to my work. I also haven't described a transformation in a while, so I threw in one of those as well. Honestly, I always feel like these types of captions are some of my weaker pieces. I guess that's because I write dialog so easily I tend to neglect more distant perspectives, so I don't practice them as much as I should. I've read so many captions and stories that describe transformations so much better than I ever could, so I tend to avoid them as no one likes admitting their shortcomings. But it's something I really need to do more often as that's the only way I'm ever going to get better at it. See you Wednesday.

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A Ballet to Remember

ADS A quickie involving tutus to tie you over for a bit.

This is something I made extremely fast as I don't have a ton of time to caption, but I wanted to get something out as I've been slacking in terms of production lately. Similarly to the surgery formspring request I don't feel like I nailed the concept quite as well as I could have, so expect to see another ballet caption in the near future when I can put a little more time into the idea.

I'm still working out some kinks for "Seven" in how I want to narrate the series, but I have found some amazing pictures. So even if you don't care for the story, you will hopefully be able to enjoy some of the best looking images I've ever used in my captions. Perhaps you will see the first real installment of the series this weekend, but I'll have to see how it's developing. If not, I'm sure I'll put out something new in the next couple of days as I should have a little bit of time to caption.

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Not Slutty Enough

ADS What? Two captions in one week? That's right boys and girls, and I can't believe it either. But before you get your hopes up, let me come right out and say this isn't some of my best writing, just something quick and fun. I was really tired while making this, but I still felt a strong desire to make a caption anyway. I haven't had that in a while, so it was nice to have a little inspiration again. So please excuse any typos, I'll proofread this again tomorrow just to make sure I didn't miss anything, but I wanted to get it out to you as soon as possible as I've been slacking in terms of the number of updates recently. I probably won't be able to make anything else until after Valentine's Day (hence the reference in the caption) but if I get lucky and find some more free time I'll certainly try.

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Melt

ADS My first caption with the title in the image. I'm fairly happy with how the caption ended up looking, the story is nothing special though. It's funny, I actually meant for this to be one of my standard forced lesbian taunting captions but I just couldn't make it happen. The past couple captions have been relatively clean (at least for my standards anyway) as I haven't been in a good smut writing mood in a while. I'll try to dirty things up a bit in the next update as I know that's what most of you come here looking for in the first place.

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Submission to Beauty

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It's always a good day when I make a caption with the always lovely Faye Reagan. So I was happy to find the time this afternoon to make the longer cap I mentioned. As far as three panel stories go this one is still pretty short, but it was nice to do something with a little more story than my usual singles. I had some issues writing this one as I felt like it kept coming across as being an almost nonsensical ramble. I think I was just trying to go in too many different directions at the same time. I still feel the final product is a little disjointed, but it's a lot better than where it was after the first draft or two.

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Panty Punishment

ADS What is this, three new captions on three consecutive days? And this is my fourth new caption this week? It's almost like I'm turning out new content on a consistent basis.

This is just another quickie that I'm using to play around with new ideas and new perspectives. Again, it's nothing fancy or really erotic, but hopefully stuff like this will keep the creative juices flowing so when I do get a good idea I don't freeze up with a case of writer's block again.

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Just Ask

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I've been in a bit of a rut these past couple of weeks. I'm still putting out new captions, but I haven't really loved any of them. I just sort of feel like I'm spinning my wheels. So I'm taking a tip from my newest caption and asking for what I want. If you've got a few minutes check out the new page I just added the explains what my current situation is and how I think it can be fixed. I'd really appreciate it.

Anyway, here's a new caption for your viewing pleasure. Enjoy.

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How Lucky You Are

ADS Nothing too special with today's update. I've had this image in my "To Caption" folder for a long time and I finally decided it was time to just get it done. It's nothing that hasn't been done many times before by myself and plenty of others, but I still think it turned out okay.

I'm going to try to turn out at least one new caption a week now that I'm back. It's a bit of a step down from my ideal of three updates every week, but I'm still trying to find a balance between sticking to a schedule and actually finding the time to create new material.

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Big, Bouncy, Boobies

ADS I love alliteration. Nothing creates a playful tone as quickly or as easily. Anyway, here's something I threw together to hold you all over until I finish my next request. I just realized I've been sitting on it for over a month, so hopefully I can get it finished this weekend at the latest. December really, wasn't a good month for me. At my current captioning rate I'll double my output this month, and I honestly thought I was off to a slow start this year. I'm considering switching to loose schedule for 2012. I still want to turn out three captions a week, but I'm not sure if I want regularly scheduled update days. Let me know if have an opinion one way or the other, I'm interested to see what you all think.

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Cute Little Sissy

ADS After the last caption's more serious tone, I felt the need to do something fun. And nothing says "fun" quite like rhyming couplets. I need to be in the right mood to write in this style, but these kind of captions are the ones I probably enjoy creating the most. Enjoy.

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My Sissy

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Hey everyone, here's a new caption for your viewing pleasure. This is a bit of a combination between my classic lesbian mistress captions and my newer more introspective stuff. A bit of humiliation, with a bit of forced self-reflection if you will. I'm not sure how I feel about the end result, but I'm glad I made it. I'm still trying to find the direction I want my new captions to generally go in (don't worry I'm still going to shoot for a variety of themes and tones), while keeping the best parts of my earlier work. It's an equally fun and frustrating process, and hopefully it will all lead to better captions for all of us.

But in the meantime, if you want to see my old style at it's best, check out this homage caption made for me by Smitty. Smitty's captions are always brilliant, and his work is a big influence for me to continue pushing my captions to be better. So I was pleasantly surprised and extremely honored that as part of his running homage to fellow cappers he decided to dedicate an entire week to my work. So if you have some time go check out it out. If you like what I post here, I can promise that you're going to love it.

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Dumb Whore

ADS The long awaited return of POV captions.

I recently received a request for some more POV captions, and seeing how I hadn't done one in a while I figured now was as good a time as any to bring back an old standby. Now this is by no means one of my best captions, but it was a fun quickie to make, and hopefully some light, simple smut is a nice change of pace from my heavier, more concept oriented Seven captions.

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